Project 1 Preliminary Critique

[hiitsyuri24]

Hi! Last one is my favorite. I like how you organized everything. I would work on paragraph more.

[giusti56]

I like both designs, and love how they are illustrated. It reminds me a lot of most of your other projects and I think it is well done overall. I like the airplane design just a little bit more, but both are amazing.

[Zera-Chann]

I like the second concept better I'm just confused on why theres a red dot in the middle

Good luck!

[Tickosity]

I like the open and airy feel to your designs. I however feel that the second set is less successful without the picture of the woman, it just feels like it is mainly about the airplane and less about you.