Preliminary Art Work

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clawson
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Joined: Wed Aug 29, 2018 1:42 pm

Re: Preliminary Art Work

Post by clawson »

You have such great images they carry the whole design well. Some small suggestions are consider making the text boxes a little bigger than the text . In the mountain image your name could have a bigger contrast.
Clara Lawson

Tickosity
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Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2018 9:32 pm

Re: Preliminary Art Work

Post by Tickosity »

I really like that you were able to use the photos as your backgrounds and to keep the focus on them. My one critique is that a couple of the photos are a bit busy and it's kind of hard to see the navigation and other information.
Latham Furman

tandyg
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Joined: Wed Aug 29, 2018 8:41 am
Location: Sparks, NV

Re: Preliminary Art Work

Post by tandyg »

Hi Kaitlyn-

The color of the first web layout is neat. I like the perspective of the ocean and the dept created. The type is lost in the dark background. I wonder if a text box with the background could solve the problem of the hidden text of the content.
Tandy G
GRC 175, Web Design and Publishing I, Fall 2019
Truckee Meadows Community College

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