Project 1 Prelim Critique

[Tickosity]

Personally I prefer your designs that are a bit darker, I just find them easier to read. Specifically the first of your mobile and the first of your desktop designs. I'm not too sure how I feel about the background, it is a bit busy and I almost find it distracting from the content.

[matt]

Hi Staci

I really like the 2nd layout. The 2nd layout has a bright look that is visually pleasing on the eye. I also like the font types that you picked and your logo is pretty sweet!

[tandyg]

Hi Staci-
These layouts are so creative and eye catchy. I almost thought "Eye Candy". I like the geometric shapes with the prominent logo design. These are neat. Thanks for sharing.