project I final / Agostina Renaud

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agostina_renau
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project I final / Agostina Renaud

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I made the decision to go with the sunflower design, the other had a lot of potential but I didn't have the time to make it look cooler. I don't know what's supposed to go in this comment but I have 3 minutes to submit before I'm late so..
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kayla.pressburger
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I love your layouts! The sunflower adds a really nice pop of color, and the typeface you used for your name is perfect! Great job!
Kayla Pressburger

Drakula
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Hi Agostina,

I love the boho vibe of your layout! its very simple and effective, it makes me want explore the whole site. Great job!
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emilyduke
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Hey! These are nice, I like the simplicity of them, the sunflower really pops.
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matt
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Post by matt »

Hi Agostina from Argentina

I like the simplicity of your design. I also like how you used hierarchy to define your site layout. maybe adding some paper overlay texture to the white space would help give this more of a polished look. Great work!
Matty James

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jason_hosier
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Post by jason_hosier »

Wow Agostina, the sunflower really pops! Maybe you could put a line under your title though. it might separate the page a little better and make your Title stand out more, just a thought. I look forward to seeing your ideas develop.
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Jackal
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Post by Jackal »

Hi Agostina!

I love your website a lot! The one sunflower really makes it visually interesting because of how bright it is compared to the rest of your composition. Your type choices are also really nice, good job!
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Jones
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Post by Jones »

I like the way you layered things, and the color choices you made to help bring a focus to the yellow sun flower. The page has a great 3d feel. Could you make the flower a little bigger?

tweetysmurf2350
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Post by tweetysmurf2350 »

I really love this! It looks very streamline. The only thing I would change is there is a contrast issue with your name and the grayscale background, but other than that it looks great!
Terri J. Taber

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anayaestevan
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Post by anayaestevan »

Really good stuff here!

I like the aesthetic. Very 1910's WW1 feel. Maybe that's just me.

I think you could push the letter theme further. Maybe use a typewriter font? Play around with the flower to make it look older or lower quality to really push the vintage thing?

Excited to see where this goes.
Estevan Anaya

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