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The animals are really cute! I would make the paragraphs same between mobile and computer version.
Yuri Aoki
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Hey Clara, Your art style is really interesting here. The colors all go very well together. I think maybe you should choose a different color for your body copy though, Great job!!
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-Evelyn Lopez
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I like your colors Clara. I get this children's book feel from your web layout.
I think putting your Home, Projects, and Links would be better suited at the top and smaller type size.
Maybe revisiting some web design layouts could bring forth some inspiration.
I think putting your Home, Projects, and Links would be better suited at the top and smaller type size.
Maybe revisiting some web design layouts could bring forth some inspiration.
Jason Alavez
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I really love your artwork. I think your right margins need tending, and you're missing some required info.
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The image choice is very playful, I like the color choices. The thing that I am concerned about is the text flow, the margins should be tighter or perhaps the font smaller?
Rachel Cao
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We are all just having too much fun
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I love the changes you made to your layout! I agree with Emily - I think you can get rid of the fish - or copy the mobile design with the fish in the bear mouth for the computer design. Awesome job!
Staci Wilson
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"I used to think I was indecisive, but now I'm not too sure" -Not too sure
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Hi Clara,
I really like your illustration on your layout. Its really cute!
Jaime
I really like your illustration on your layout. Its really cute!
Jaime
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