Project01-Final-Layout01

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kj923
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I really like your web layout!!! It reminds me of the new show on Netflix, Maniac! lol! I would like to see your mobile deisgn match in color a little bit better because i really like the orange color in the web layout
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Re: Project01-Final-Layout01

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Oh cool. It looks like shower glass now. Switching over the the white background really opened this design up.

I like the shine soap/oil slick gradient. That combined with the white makes it look like a backlit art glass installation or some expensive shower glass that someone paid way too much money for. The split complimentary colors you chose work well together by their nature and they really sell the lighting of the thing. Nice use of contrast at the top with the black bar. It draws the eye and starts you down the page. Your class info does a good job as a pseudo bottom frame. I also like the gaps you added into the nailhead texture on your computer layout. It surprisingly gives the thing quite a bit more visual interest. It feels like white space almost. I like how you line up the edge of your bio information with the edge of your class info on your computer layout. That's a real slick bit of alignment. Your font choices and tracking work well too. As does the gradient you use in your bio text.

The class info at the bottom is a little close to the left and right edges on your mobile design and a little close to the nailhead texture above it on the computer design. The bottom margin of your email is close to the nailhead texture on your mobile design.

Nice work.
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Hey Matt, I really like that bright color orange you chose. The texture you used for the background is also super different and awesome!
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I really like the texture that you made. Look really cool!
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Big_DaDdy
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Love it! awesome! great concept, well executed.
The only thing missing are the web tabs: project 2, project 3, links tab, work and your body copy with self-description.
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The image is super striking, very atmospheric! I just wondering now how the navigation will work?
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I love your design work, but I'm not seeing any navigation.

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Stasiavous
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I love it! You would think the background would make it too busy - but it doesn't! It works perfectly. Great job!
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Hey, I like the redone color scheme and think it really made this design better overall. I wouldn't change anything on it.
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Re: Project01-Final-Layout01

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Hi Matt
I really like your layout. Its really cool!
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