Project 1 Final

[kj923]

I like how you were able to incorporate your passion into your design!

I would like to suggest playing with your rule of thirds for your mobile design, it feels a little top heavy

[evexhouses]

I love the colors! And everything is so "techy" i really like your design! Your photo should be a bit bigger and your name too!!

[hiitsyuri24]

Hi Dana! I really like your background and colors. Great job!

[raton de biblioteca]

The clean lines draw my eye to the background layout more than the body-copy. I love the fonts for the navigation, but I agree with the name size. Your name should be like up to 11. Or perhaps make the other background color more transparent?

[giusti56]

I like the background image and the colors and feel it brings to the design, I still think the type could use a better font choice though.

[Big_DaDdy]

Hi Dana, looks good. I think you have a bit of empty space that you can use to spread things around to create a visual hierarchy for your viewers. The drop shadow on your name and tabs make it a bit difficult to read especially with your background image.

[veronica chapman]

Love your background image! Love that you justified your body copy. My only suggestion is on your mobile version. You have a lot of unused space on the lower portion. You might want to arrange somehow so as not to have the imbalance.

[tandyg]

I'm not sure if I have commented. Just a little late here. I like the colors and balance with light opacity of the background compared to your vivid image. Neat concepts.