Project 2 Rough

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evexhouses
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Re: Project 2 Rough

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That site actually made me want to scream, I like the fact that you tried to keep the brick wall idea except updated and better! I do think you should as some sort of visual interest in there, right now its sort of just lonely?
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Stasiavous
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I like the layout of the brick design, but I love the beer background too! Wow, the original design is hard on the eyes! You did a great job making it easy on the eyes. :-)
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themeg98
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I think your first design has a lot more unity by using the same background. The second set just doesn't really speak to me. The first is also easier to understand.
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I would like to see more yummyness if this is a good website!! But keep the brick
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Tickosity
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I don't get the feeling of a German restaurant from the first designs, they feel kind of generic. The second ones feel more German but they also feel kind of plain to me.
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The pages are clean and clearly organized. Great concept to use the images in the background.
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Big_DaDdy
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Yuri, I like the typeface that you selected for the name of the joint. I would use more classy, beer/ restaurant/ lounge/ back of restaurant fire pit images. I think you're holding your design back from its potential with just having a brick wall as the entire image. I like the overall layout of both, I just think you need a bit more imagery to push your concept forward, good work :)
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hi Yuri,

I prefer the brick background layout over the other bc it's gives the background more texture and makes the composition more visually appealing. I agree that the background texture may be a little more visually appealing with more going on but having the background with brick isn't bad either. maybe a few different brick themes throughout the website would keep it visually interesting while giving it a theme and design too
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