project 2 prelim

[themeg98]

I would go with the second set since I like the stained glass better. its more fluid and theres tons of ways you could use it as a element.

[hiitsyuri24]

I like the first set of the design. I really like the image and the color. My suggestion would be playing with the fonts. Some parts are kind of hard to read.

[Stasiavous]

Oh my gosh! Such an improvement over their site. I'm loving the stained glass version best. It's so pleasing to the eye and makes me want to click to learn more about their congregation! Great job Clara!

[Tickosity]

For me the cross design is the more interesting of the two. I would like to have some more contrast in the type though because for my eyes it is a little hard to read with the white type. However my eyes are very sensitive to light so it probably is just me.

[agostina_renau]

Hi Clara,
I like the imagery choice a lot!!
but I see empty spaces

[Jackal]

Hi Clara!

I really like your second designs the most, your designs look a little empty though.. I would recommend adding more photos or graphics/accents! I love the stained glass photo, nice job!

[Big_DaDdy]

Hi Clara, I like the logo that you're using here. I think you need more imagery, right now there is a ton of blue and white text and that about it. I love the imagery of the last one! I just feel that high quality imagery of people in service, playing music, praying, preaching would better illustrate the religious connection when visiting that church. The layout looks more like a book to me. I think your typefaces are to expressive in the body copy that it begins to be unreadable, eligible. Hope this helps

[matt]

Hi Clara

in terms of layout and what it currently looks like I prefer the second layout to the first bc I think the second layout presents the brand much more clear. I also like the color choices that you've made. the type faces could use a little bit more attention too. Great work!