Prelim. #2
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I like how clean and how soft the colors are. its definitely an improvement.
Megan Horner
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The first design is really clean, and that one is my favorite. Sentences are little hard to read I think. I would make them little bigger.
Yuri Aoki
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Kind of ironic that the images on the original site are blurry? Your designs are WAY better than this website! I like the first design over the second one because of the navigation bar and information tiles. I always like a website that is easy to follow when my eyes are bothering me.
Rachel Cao
We are all just having too much fun
We are all just having too much fun
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Hi April!
your choice of color is great, I think you should stick to it!
And by far the second design is great.
your choice of color is great, I think you should stick to it!
And by far the second design is great.
Agostina From Argentina
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I like the more modern feel of the second design, it does feel like it's for a younger audience to me.
Latham Furman
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Hey April!
I really like the second desktop version, I would maybe try incorporating the structure you've set in the first one with the bar across the top though! Nice job!!
I really like the second desktop version, I would maybe try incorporating the structure you've set in the first one with the bar across the top though! Nice job!!
JACKAL
"I gotta get better at being me" - Kevin Abstract
"I gotta get better at being me" - Kevin Abstract
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Hi I like the layout of the design. The eye in the background is appealing. Looking t=for the text and navigation. It seems faded out a bit.
Tandy G
GRC 175, Web Design and Publishing I, Fall 2019
Truckee Meadows Community College
GRC 175, Web Design and Publishing I, Fall 2019
Truckee Meadows Community College
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Hi April, layout is headed in a good direction. The homepage is to blue, I feel that a background, transparent image might help out. The smaller icon images in the homepage might be a good opportunity to showcase nice photography of eyewear and such instead of silhouette icons. Again headed in a good direction, good work.
Jason Alavez
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I really like the 2nd design. It really looks like a official website. Have fun!
Jaime
Jaime
Jaime Ramey
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I like the o1 design best, good layout, professional look. The photo seems to have a lot of yellow. I'd consider adding a curve to the photo for more of a white light rather than yellow.
Clara Lawson