proj-02-rough-critique

[agostina_renau]

I like this very much, however, the dates and text and all the info just look the same.
I think maybe the date should have some kind of different color or whatever, just to Give it Mir hierarchy

[Tickosity]

I really enjoy your second version. The photo really draws the attention without being too distracting from the rest of the content.

[Big_DaDdy]

Hi Rachel, I'm enjoying your imagery. I think layout one is simplified more and therefore become cleaner and easier to navigate. It is, however, feeling a little unbalanced with so many different typefaces used, I think you can organize your schedule a bit more to give an organized sense of web interaction. Your solid blue box containing your body copy takes away from your design ( I believe). Your scrolling text over your imagery begins to get lost...I'm sure you can come up with a solution Layout one is headed is a good direction, hope this helps

[veronica chapman]

really love your image. your text box is covering you navigation in your second design.

[veronica chapman]

really love your image. your text box is covering you navigation in your second design.

[matt]

I really like how the layout of the first one looks. I like how you put everything into a scroll format instead of on the right like the 2nd layout. it feels a lot more open than the second one.