Hey Stac!
I really like the first ones best! I love that you used the logo again! I just think it looks a little cluttered like too much test is on there.
Project 3 Prelims
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-Evelyn Lopez
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Nice design, Good readability & clean design. Looks like it would be easy to navigate.
Clara Lawson
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Hi Staci!!
I really like your first option. Your choice of photo of the TMCC campus is so nice and all the different accents go together nicely!
Only thing I would do is change your fonts to match up with the degree page, nice job!!!
I really like your first option. Your choice of photo of the TMCC campus is so nice and all the different accents go together nicely!
Only thing I would do is change your fonts to match up with the degree page, nice job!!!
JACKAL
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I really like the first one! It looks really professional! Great job!
Yuri Aoki
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Ooooh! I like the introduction of the dark teal. It mutes TMCC's horrifying lime/olive color.
I like your first design a little better. I think it's the diagonal dividers and transparent background image in your header. The dividers do a good job of sectioning the content and the transparent background adds visual interest. I also like your little colored tiles. They introduce your three main colors, serve as great space filler and you call 'em back nicely in your logo and headlines. Heck, you've even got 'em in your dropdown menu. Speaking of menus, your navigation is well placed and easy to use, and ties into your design nicely. Good typography choices as well. All of your various fonts and weights work well together.
I'd recommend adding some more imagery to the internal pages. Right now they are a bit of a (excellently laid out) wall of text. Maybe try justifying your bodycopy too. That'd turn them into blocks that you can use as design elements. Watch your margins a bit on your mobile version. It's getting vertically crammed especially around the diagonal dividers.
Good work!
I like your first design a little better. I think it's the diagonal dividers and transparent background image in your header. The dividers do a good job of sectioning the content and the transparent background adds visual interest. I also like your little colored tiles. They introduce your three main colors, serve as great space filler and you call 'em back nicely in your logo and headlines. Heck, you've even got 'em in your dropdown menu. Speaking of menus, your navigation is well placed and easy to use, and ties into your design nicely. Good typography choices as well. All of your various fonts and weights work well together.
I'd recommend adding some more imagery to the internal pages. Right now they are a bit of a (excellently laid out) wall of text. Maybe try justifying your bodycopy too. That'd turn them into blocks that you can use as design elements. Watch your margins a bit on your mobile version. It's getting vertically crammed especially around the diagonal dividers.
Good work!
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mganschow@tmcc.edu | 673-8200 ext.5-2173
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Your designs looks so fun! I feel like I'm going to an art school looking at this, not just a community college! You did a great job with your contrast in the design!
-Kaitlyn Johnson