My Project Critique. Give it to me straight.

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z1claudia
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Joined: Wed Jan 30, 2019 2:14 pm

Re: My Project Critique. Give it to me straight.

Post by z1claudia »

Hi, the top two are great. They have a fun 70's feel to them. Not much I can recommend here. The only thing is the text especially in the mobile seems like it could be easier to read maybe by lowering the picture's opacity just a bit but that's just a suggestion. I like what you did. It's a website that makes me curious to check out.
Claudia Zamudio

Tickosity
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Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2018 9:32 pm

Re: My Project Critique. Give it to me straight.

Post by Tickosity »

I think I prefer the simple pineapple design between the two. I'm just not too sure about the font you used for your name.
Latham Furman

erino
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Joined: Fri Feb 01, 2019 12:48 pm

Re: My Project Critique. Give it to me straight.

Post by erino »

I like your top design it has that outdoor theme look. Your name gets hard to read maybe you can play with the shadows or fonts.
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Jaime Ramey
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Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2018 2:10 pm

Re: My Project Critique. Give it to me straight.

Post by Jaime Ramey »

Hi there,
I really like the pineapple design. I do think it might need a little more detail. I am sure you are planning on it. The colors are pretty cool too!
Jaime
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