Project 01 Preliminary Roughs

[Brandon_P]

I really like your first design the way is layered and the color scheme of it. You might want to spread out your links evenly across the whole bottom.

[Gr8K8]

I think both of your designs turned out really cool! I love the colors in the orange/teal one. But I loooove the bunny illustration and the soft colors of the lavender layout.

For the orange/teal versions, I think the computer layout is better spaced than the mobile layout. I would play with your placement of objects a little more. Perhaps move the header/orange section up a little bit more to leave more room below for the rest of your content.

For your purple design I feel the opposite. I'm liking the placement of everything more in your mobile version than the computer version. In the computer version, perhaps consider moving your 'about me' paragraph and you nav buttons in to the right a bit, to allow some breathing room/margins at the edge of the design?

Excited to see which one you'll move forward with!

[darth vader de pot noodle]

PRIVET (Russian)
the last design is nice i like it a lot, the image is pretty and the background color goes well with it. thats all.
Juan YEETER Moreno

[genesis_urena]

Hello! Adriana

Really colorful happy themes. I would prefer your minimalistic theme just cause seems easy to navigate, clean and complete. I do think the orange part can be develop more and I found some type little difficult to read. Overall I like your style and the way you express it

[Fear The Deer]

Hi Adrianna!
I love the sketch in the second layouts image, but I think the first layout overall is better; the orange is very welcoming and compliments the flowers well, and I think the faded effect you gave them does a good job of showing their texture but not being to busy for the text. The only thing that stands out is I feel the alignment of 'contact me at' and your email on mobile feel very disjointed, maybe they could both be center aligned to separate them from the body copy while still being together?

[Sugar_/\ppul]

Hey Adrianna, I like the flower theme you got in both designs. For the first design the colors are very neat and blend well with each other, but for the mobile format it's a bit too busy in the middle with the light color details of the flowers beneath light colored text with a white border. There is also too much empty space above your name. I like the monochromatic take with purple. The text is easy to read and the layout is really calming.