Project 01 Prelim Roughs

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cwalkerdesign
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Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs

Post by cwalkerdesign »

hello,
I love the artwork in both designs. both are functional. the one with the little kid catches my eye more because of the layout and how you designed it.
great job
charmane
Charmaine

Brandon_P
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Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs

Post by Brandon_P »

I like your first design simple and clear to read. Its is missing the TMCC logo and on the mobile version if you have the links on the screen you don't really need the hamburger menu.
Brandon Plunkett

mack_schneider
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Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs

Post by mack_schneider »

Hi Jessica! I love your artwork! Definitely show it off in your website. I think the font you used for your name in the second design would look really nice with your first composition. Otherwise, both designs are terrific!
Mackenzie Schneider

Sugar_/\ppul
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Joined: Mon Aug 26, 2019 5:48 pm

Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs

Post by Sugar_/\ppul »

Hello Jessica, I love the illustration for the first design, and how the typeface looks drawn, and definitely the colors, they fit together so perfectly to create something cute.


I also like how your second design looks. That landscape creates a calming mood and makes me want to stay on the site.
~ Jessie Alanis :)

genesis_urena
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Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs

Post by genesis_urena »

Hi Jessica! Both look really good. I like how you have consistency and unity in both designs. I would play more with type. I do find the landscape theme more like a serious personality when the cartoon presents me an animator personality. Well done!
GENESISURENA

smartinez33
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Re: Project 01 Prelim Roughs

Post by smartinez33 »

Hi Jessica, both of your design looks great, I love your character it's fun and cute in the layout. The second layout looks beautiful it's the relaxing mood with the colors. I would recommend play with the type.

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Sandra Martinez

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