Project 1 roughs Brandon_P

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trixiapanda
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Post by trixiapanda »

Stay true to blue, Brandon!

I like both designs, but I have to say that the second design caught me in a bit of surprised because the layout is very unique (who would have thought of putting the links in the middle of a homepage?? Mind-blown genius.) So, if I were to choose one, I would say the second design! However, I noticed that people are complaining about the colors on your design... and I ain't gonna lie... it does feel kinda dull... :/ But, I wouldn't mind if you use blue as the main color, maybe use a different blue? Play around with it! Hopefully you can find a way to make the colors stick out! Overall, great job!!
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Post by mack_schneider »

Howdy! Love the blues! I think the first design's image is very strong compared to your other design. With the second design, it would be good to check out some different ways to work with the typography and play with different placements to see what fits best with the rest of the composition. Great work!
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Post by TheWalapus »

Hi Brandon! I think your "create" design is really strong. What I like most about this design is that you established a good hierarchy by using your type sizes. I also like how you used the menu bar to create depth by placing it over the create symbol. If you were to improve anything, I would say you should explore some more options for your body copy.
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darth vader de pot noodle
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Post by darth vader de pot noodle »

konbanwa
the first set is good and the image with creative fits nicely good job
thats all

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genesis_urena
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Post by genesis_urena »

Hello!

I like the most your first rough because seems more neat and clean. I think if you decide go for the second a change of imagery would wok fine. I like how you organize your layout and gives an overall unity. The color turn very well and the transparency you are applying worked nicely. You can experiment with a funnier typeface or blend the image a little bit. Nice job :)
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Post by Paula B »

Hi Brandon,

I really like how clean your designs are. They're easily readable and very nice to look at. I do prefer the first one but like the second one because it looks a bit more personalized comparing the photos that were used. I think you can experiment with that a little more. Otherwise, super nice design.
Paula Belarmino

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Fear The Deer
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Post by Fear The Deer »

Howdy Brandon,
I like the diamond frame you use for your imagery in the first set, it helps it stand out more. I think in the mobile layout of that set it may be interesting to try some other colors for the background of the text box, as the pure white makes the box and image sort of blend together. Maybe a lighter/ somewhat more saturated blue? or possible a yellow to tie back to the lightbulb imagery?
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Post by Sugar_/\ppul »

Hey Brandon, great looking concepts you have here. I like that "CREATE" image in your first design, it's inspiring. Your layouts for both designs and concepts are great, there's not much I can really say. For your second design, perhaps lower the image on the top right of the page and raise the links on top.
~ Jessie Alanis :)

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