Project 1 Preliminary Critique

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Brandon_P
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Meeeeow I like your second design Clear and easy to navigate and who doesn't like kitties.'
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mack_schneider
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Holy moly! You've got some terrific designs there! I love the cat logo you created! I personally feel like the color scheme on the first design drew me into your homepage more than the yellow and navy blue. Red, black, and white might be easier to work with. Beautiful work as always though!
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TheWalapus
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Hi Katelyn, these are awesome. I love how different they both are. I think your vintage design is one of my favorites that I've seen so far. Both sites are easy to navigate and are interesting to look at. The only suggestion I have is to play around with the projects 1-3 button locations. There is a lot of empty space in that corner that I think you could use. Nice job!
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darth vader de pot noodle
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shalom
i like the cat in the yellow surrounded by blue it is super simple and neet. thats all.
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Fear The Deer
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Hi Katelyn!
I really love the sketchbook and artistic feeling of your first layout, especially the 'scribbles' on top of the images. I think it could be used more than once, like possible the dots as well, or I even think you could drop down the 'hello!' to overlap the very top of the regular type, to add to the 'written over' feeling! It's a very nice and dynamic touch. I also think the top links bar could be shrunk a bit.
Jessica Laughead

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Post by Sugar_/\ppul »

Hey Katelyn, great job keeping consistency of your layouts and designs through the different formats. I like the yellow cat design for it being cute and simplistic with nice positioning of text. On the mobile version, there is empty space to the right of the cat image, maybe place your name there in yellow for contrast and the dividers for the links being white gets lost in the yellow maybe change it to that neat deep blue you got there. Your other design has an artsy look to it and it works. I like that the color for "Hello!" is matching that rose and also looks like handwriting. If I had to tell you which one you should probably go for, I'd say the vintage concept.
~ Jessie Alanis :)

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