Prelim Critique - Project 01

Post links to your Project One websites for discussion and feedback.
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darth vader de pot noodle
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Re: Prelim Critique - Project 01

Post by darth vader de pot noodle »

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the last two are my favorite because they are dark which make the flowers pop out much more. maybe more flowers dont know. thats all.
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trixiapanda
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OMG OMG I LOVE KIRBY KAITLIN!!

Anyways, you got some awesome designs here!! If I had to choose which design you should go for, I would definitely say the first one. It is very creative, very eye-catching, and it makes your audience wander around a lot! Although there are a lot of colors going on, I think they are all working well together! The fonts you chose are fun and the arrangements are very clean. Great job Kaitlin!
♡ Trixia Benitez

Brandon_P
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Wow I love your second design all the colors work great together. Florem ipum rofl. Good work just need to have your email, course description, and the logo be at the same baseline to even them out/
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Sugar_/\ppul
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Hello Kaitlin, I really like your first design, it seems personal than the other design. I am really digging the torn paper elements, the header image of a bland torn paper revealing a rainbow underneath with your name is super cool and so is using scraps of paper as links. I do notice there is some alignment issues with the links and how the Home button goes off of the scrap of paper and onto of the buttons.

I do like the color scheme of the second desing but I believe it's a bit too busy in the middle for the body text. Perhaps up the opacity of the pink box. I also like the typeface you used for your name, it really fits with the elegant theme I'm getting from this.
~ Jessie Alanis :)

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Post by genesis_urena »

Hello!

Liking both of your designs. I would go with the second design because feels complete, colorful but neat at same time. I do think if you wanna go with the first design you can develop it more when is imagery and text. The broken design at the bottom is really original and the flowers make it so cheerful and stylish. Nice job :)
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Hi Kaitlin, I love both of your designs it's cute and crafty. I recommend the first design, I think you should move the homepage on the scrape paper instead of buttons.

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Paula B
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Post by Paula B »

Hi Kaitlin,

I really like the colors on your designs. I personally find the first one super nice because of the graphic. It looks organized and easier to read than the darker version. Great job
Paula Belarmino

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Fear The Deer
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Hi Kaitlin,
Your second layout is very elegant, and your color choices compliment the background very well! I like the slight shadow effect you added, the only issue I have is the text in the box is a little too dark of a green, and makes it harder to read.
Jessica Laughead

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