Project 01 Prelim Critique

[Brandon_P]

I like your first design it's simple and clean. on the second design if you get rid of one of the links you can make the mobile version look better an even everything out.

[Gr8K8]

Hey Trixia,

Both of your designs turned out really great! I love how clean and straightforward they are. I also like the pop of cuteness - like the cursive fonts, or the pops of color in your links - that you added to both.
Overall I think the ocean layout grabs me just a little bit more than the cloud background layout. The only thing I can really think to comment on as far as improvement goes would be to maybe play with the color that you've got in the strip behind the "About me" text. For me, the blue you're using feels a little out of place and disjointed from the rest of the colors. Maybe try one of the purples that shows up in the picture?

Excited to see how you develop these concepts further!

[darth vader de pot noodle]

Hej (Swedish)
the last two have good consistency and the second one of the first set is cool if you could combine them both that could work. that's all.
Juan YEETER Moreno

[genesis_urena]

Hello! I like both of your designs. I would choose the first version because it transmits me a fun and dynamic feeling while the other rough seems more seriously. Both represent a unit and clean design. I do like the colorful lines that you add making it colorful without adding too much.

[smartinez33]

Hi Trixia, your two designs looks lovely it's clean and simple, I think you try the white tmcc logo instead of green.

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Sandra Martinez

[Paula B]

Hi Trixia,

Both designs look really nice. They're simple but pleasing to the eye. I think the 1st set works better because it looks more orderly. I would suggest to change the gray bg color on the mobile rough to a lighter one so it stays in the lighter color scheme.

[Fear The Deer]

Hi Trixia!
I really like your first layout set, I think you have excellent font choices. I think the footer is thicker than it needs to be, and the white version of the TMCC logo would match to your color palette better on the desktop version. For the mobile layout, I don't think you need the black line at the end of your text, the space between and size difference versus the links I think visually divides it all by itself!

[Sugar_/\ppul]

Hey Trixia, you have some beautiful designs here. I like the background choice for both designs and also the positioning. For the mobile format of the first design I really love that grey transparent box around your About Me section and wish you included that to the computer format. Nice choice of font for your name and body text, they are easy to read. Your second design is very clean, however the only suggestion I have is to move the links on the mobile format to the top so that visitors won't have to possibly scroll to access, what I assume, your projects.