Tandy did a Project 1

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tandyg
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Tandy did a Project 1

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Hi I was all over the internet and back to photoshop. I think I have to get the TMCC logo on here and submit so I'm going to post and be off. Thanks for the comments on the website layout.
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Tandy G
GRC 175, Web Design and Publishing I, Fall 2019
Truckee Meadows Community College

NalaniN
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Hi Tandy,

The background image definitely makes the layouts more interesting. It's also good that your desktop and monitor layout now have the same color scheme. :)
Nalani Nickles

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adriannageo
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Hi Tandy, I like that you made your shapes look like Ferris wheels. I think where your name is in the layout should be moved for the mobile version. The white box around the name isn't necessary maybe make your name a yellow color?
Adrianna George

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Gr8K8
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Hey Tandy!

I really like the image you're using!
I think it's really cool how in your computer layout, because of the way the purple photo is split, it creates that T shaped space with the yellow! T for Tandy!
I do agree with the previous comment mentioning to get rid of the white box around your name in the mobile version. I feel like the white kind of takes away from the unity of the color scheme.
Kaitlin Wallberg

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Tandy DID do a Project One!

Oh, that's a nice background photo. A Burning Man photo says a lot about you. It's purply, so it compliments your big yellow strips around your design. A bright yellow header makes for a strong top frame on your image and your little parasol fans make for a nice texture. You've got good layout placement of what elements are there. Your navigation is easy to see and use. Your fonts are bold and easy to see. I like the contrast between the bold class and contact info and the thinner navigation.

The white box at the bottom of the mobile design seems out of place considering that your name is in the header on your computer design. The glow/shadow around your name is way too far from the edge. The satin effect you used on your name is nice, but it appears nowhere else in the composition. I'm not sure where your bodycopy is supposed to go in either design. And I find that I miss the orange and purple gradient. I liked it as a background on your preliminary work design. The purple and yellow navigation is nice, but it's not the same.

Good effort!
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Fear The Deer
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Hello Tandy!

I like the photos you chose for your backgrounds, they go with your wheel logos well! I like that you matched the centers of them to the lighting of each background, yellow for the brighter lit one and blue for the less bright lights! It's a nice touch!
Jessica Laughead

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Nice background photo and colors for the website, but the locations of the Navigation bar for the web and mobile versions don't match up.
Brandon Plunkett

smartinez33
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Hi Tandy, your photo looks great, especially the shapes look like flowers, stars or fireworks, Especially the colors look great.

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Sandra Martinez

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Howdy Tandy! I really liked your unique imagery for your final design!
Mackenzie Schneider

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katyroses
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Hi Tandy!
I really like your imagery for your website! I'm also enjoying how you incorporated the shapes on top of the photo. Looks cool!
Katelyn R. Brooke

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