Project 1 Preliminary Critique

[comicsansfanclub]

Hi Kendall,
Great concepts! They're both very fun! I like you're second design the most though. I'm having a hard time with your circular photo and the pointy shape in the back. They kinda clash and I think it would look best if you were to put your photo in that cool shape or leave it in that circle and get rid of the other shape. Also, make sure that the "Hi, I'm Kendall," part is aligned to the text and that both the web and mobile versions have the same alignment. One last thing, I would also change the color of the Tmcc logo because right now the purple and the green make a contrast that makes it hard to read. Great Job! Excited to see your final website

[kmohara5190]

Hi Kendall,
I really like your second website design it is so happy and bright! I think the font you chose was a good choice as well, as it is very legible even though it is smaller. I think that maybe you could change the purple background a little so that it is less flat, maybe adding a gradient could work. Good job!

[rmepinero]

Hiya Kendall!

I really like the color you used and your overall organization in both of your layouts. If you use the first set of designs, I would recommend moving your images to the bottom of your page. That way, your view gets to know more about you first and then gets to see your work.

Good job and can’t wait to see your final work!

[dearangela]

Hey Kendall,

I favor your first design! I like your choice of placing your logo in the middle, and the purple and black are an interesting color combo. I think some of your type elements need some room to breathe around each other, it does feel a little tight. Great job!

[IzzyB]

Hi Kendall!

I really like your second design! I think the picture fits with the website and I like the shape it is in. I also really like your personal logo! I would focus on changing the type. Maybe try different fonts in greys or white. There is a lot of potential here.