Project 01 Final
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it's_crysta
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Re: Project 01 Final
I love the total grayscale of your design and the low contrast graphic you have in the background. It's very sleek and easy to navigate. Great work!
it's Crysta (Clark)
i feel like i'm on neopets again
i feel like i'm on neopets again
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Mal-Festio
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Re: Project 01 Final
Hello Hazzie,
Nice on going with this layout, white is against black is a really nice is a really nice style. I agree with the other in that you should bring buttons closer together, let there be more negative space.
Nice on going with this layout, white is against black is a really nice is a really nice style. I agree with the other in that you should bring buttons closer together, let there be more negative space.
Jordi Cruz Trujillo
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ItsAllisxn
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Hi Hazzie!
I'm so glad you picked this rough! This one was definitely my favorite out of the two. I love how your incorporated the design on your hand into the background of your website. It's really hard to add images in a background and make the text work and not blend in, but you executed it perfectly and it works really well. Kudos on that. I noticed that there's a black box around the TMCC logo, and I think it would work better without that, but that's such a small detail it doesn't take away from your layout at all. Amazing job! I can't wait to see what else you come up with this semester
I'm so glad you picked this rough! This one was definitely my favorite out of the two. I love how your incorporated the design on your hand into the background of your website. It's really hard to add images in a background and make the text work and not blend in, but you executed it perfectly and it works really well. Kudos on that. I noticed that there's a black box around the TMCC logo, and I think it would work better without that, but that's such a small detail it doesn't take away from your layout at all. Amazing job! I can't wait to see what else you come up with this semester
Allison Hartmann - Kachow 
Re: Project 01 Final
Hi Hazzie!
I really love the design that you chose, this was my favorite of the two. I love the hand picture, the background, the typeface, everything about it. I think it fits your look and your style as a person. I agree with Allison that you should take the box from the TMCC logo because it is a bit weird but that is such a small detail. I really love this design overall and think you did an amazing job.
I really love the design that you chose, this was my favorite of the two. I love the hand picture, the background, the typeface, everything about it. I think it fits your look and your style as a person. I agree with Allison that you should take the box from the TMCC logo because it is a bit weird but that is such a small detail. I really love this design overall and think you did an amazing job.
Isabelle Bento (the person with the basic anime girl hair cut) UwU
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kendall_the_mann
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Re: Project 01 Final
Hi Hazzie!
Still love the Wybie profile pic!
I really love your design! It is so cool what you do with a black and white layout, and its so hard to find any flaws with it! I love the photo and I absolutely love the fonts you chose. I think the only thing I could offer is suggesting the projects to cinch a bit closer together in the mobile version, centering next to the photo. Other than that, this is such a beautifully crafted design, excellent job!
Still love the Wybie profile pic!
I really love your design! It is so cool what you do with a black and white layout, and its so hard to find any flaws with it! I love the photo and I absolutely love the fonts you chose. I think the only thing I could offer is suggesting the projects to cinch a bit closer together in the mobile version, centering next to the photo. Other than that, this is such a beautifully crafted design, excellent job!
-Kendall Mann
Re: Project 01 Final
Hi Hazzie!
I think I favored your other layout in the preliminary but as I look at this design I truly think you made the best, most effective choice. It’s dynamic and bold in a very subtle way. The contrast is so strong and I love the veins hidden in the background it’s such a cool effect but it also gives your viewer a feel of who you are as a designer/artist. There is a lot of margin between your navigation buttons and I would maybe play around with that. But otherwise I really think you did a great job!
I think I favored your other layout in the preliminary but as I look at this design I truly think you made the best, most effective choice. It’s dynamic and bold in a very subtle way. The contrast is so strong and I love the veins hidden in the background it’s such a cool effect but it also gives your viewer a feel of who you are as a designer/artist. There is a lot of margin between your navigation buttons and I would maybe play around with that. But otherwise I really think you did a great job!
Rowena Piñero
"My vibe is like, hey you could probably pour soup in my lap and I'll apologize to you."
"My vibe is like, hey you could probably pour soup in my lap and I'll apologize to you."
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kmohara5190
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Re: Project 01 Final
Hi Hazzie,
I am happy you chose this website to be your final one because I think this one looks super cool! The dark contrasting with the light gives it a very dramatic feel. The only thing I would change is making the background graphic a little less transparent so that it stands out a little more. Good job!
I am happy you chose this website to be your final one because I think this one looks super cool! The dark contrasting with the light gives it a very dramatic feel. The only thing I would change is making the background graphic a little less transparent so that it stands out a little more. Good job!
Kierann O'Hara