Project 1 final roughs

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it's_crysta
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Re: Project 1 final roughs

Post by it's_crysta »

I really like your choice of font and how pink everything is. It's a fun design and looks like it'd be easy to use. Good work!
it's Crysta (Clark)

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kendall_the_mann
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Hi Estrella!

Wow, this is PINK!!! I don't normally like monochromatic designs entirely, but this one is pretty good! My critique is entirely opinionated then, but I would suggest using a bit more white to at least accent the pink a little bit! Other than that this is a pretty design, good job!
-Kendall Mann

rmepinero
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Estrella,
The detail in this is incredible. You put a lot of work into it and it really shows. I love that everything has a cute, creative touch especially the GRC 175 Header with the little pieces of tape. It’s great! I don’t have anything to critique honestly. I do agree with Michael on the pink box behind the TMCC logo you can definitely get rid of it and it’ll look a bit cleaner there. Awesome job Estrella!
Rowena Piñero
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IzzyB
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Post by IzzyB »

Hi Estrella!

This is so adorable!! The entirety of your components are working really well together. I love the manner in which everything is spread out and is efficiently placed, making the whole design balanced. The characters work extraordinary with the colors you chose. Great job! :)
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comicsansfanclub
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Hi Estrella,

I love it! your design is so unique and fun. It is all so detailed in a way that it doesn't distract you from the type. Your organization and creativity is on point. Amazing job!
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dearangela
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Post by dearangela »

Hey Estrella,

I enjoy your pink aesthetic, the illustrations and typestyle fit really nicely and make it look fun to click around in. Can't wait to click through!
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kmohara5190
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Post by kmohara5190 »

Hi Estrella,
I love the pink website, it keeps making me smile! There are a lot of themes going on, but all in all you make them cohesive, good job!
Kierann O'Hara

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