Project 1 Final Critique

[IzzyB]

Hi Kendall!

I am really happy with you went this design. I like the cartoon look with the star shape and I love how your picture fits in with the website. I think that the type on the bottom is a little hard to read but the overall theme is very nice and cute to look at

[Mal-Festio]

Hello Kendall,

Great design you have, the colors and elements are working well together. The hierarchy of elements is also pretty good, I think its great that my attention goes to your picture first l, then your name and logo, then your body text.

[sal_baraj]

Hi
I like how you made your picture the center, I also like the simplicity and color

[Meghna_Misson]

Hi Kendall,

Long time no see! Your final website designs are so cute and cool! It honestly reminds me of another website that I am inspired by, http://katemoross.com, that also has the designers' profile picture on the home page as well. I really like your color scheme, and how you made the lightish purple hue your dominant color. Another thing to mention is your logo, and I enjoy how you incorporated it into both of your designs--it really provides the feeling of professionalism when visiting your page for the first time and makes it easy to connect it to your person! The only thing that I would recommend on changing is decreasing the weight on the black stroke [of the shape] behind your image; I think that it somewhat conflicts with the overall appearance of your two designs, and if you decide to lessen it, it would not be too harsh. Besides that, there is nothing else for me to give any more possible feedback on, and I think you satisfy all the criteria listed for this project. Great work! (and P.S. pet your bearded dragon for me! (so sorry for forgetting its name!))

-Meghna

[Kelsey_Reynolds]

Hi Kendall! as an animator, i've got an appreciation for cartoony styles! I think your background could use a liiiiiittle more pazzaz! otherwise great job!

[dearangela]

Hi Kendall,

I like your color choice and your imagery on top of a shape, it makes it very interesting! The only thing I can say is there is a little extra space on your mobile layout, between the "Hi, I'm" and Kendall Man; other than that great job!

[comicsansfanclub]

Hi Kendall,

I love how your design is personal, simple, professional, and fun. You did a really nice job with hierarchy and guiding the eye throughout your website. Awesome job

[kmohara5190]

Hi Kendall,
I like how legible all your font is, and how the layout is very comprehensive! Maybe a background gradient with the purple would add some contrast, but overall I like it, good work!