Project One

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m_pfaff
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Project One

Post by m_pfaff »

forgot to post this last night. Here's my project one.

Please feel free to add to my already growing list of things I need to fix.

Thanks for any and all input.



http://grc175.com/student/spring_2012/m ... mas_pfaff/

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R3YNO
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Re: Project One

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Its not bad, If you have time I would set the background color to black
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Alaxvong
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Post by Alaxvong »

I agree with Chris. The black background will make the design breathe better because the white makes it seem cluttered. It's all functional though, so good job.

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sktlz1965
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Yes, add the black background, and maybe bring it away from the top by adding padding to the overall box so its more centered in the screen and one last thing is the "about" button, hard to read because its so close to the side. Other than that I think its really interesting and has some good depth to it. I think its held together nicely and in right order. Good Job!

Faith
"Design is simply thinking made visual"

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artgalstyle
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Post by artgalstyle »

I too think a black background would make it feel more spacious and make it maybe easier to read the side ways text. I love the image you used and the colors are great. Can't wait to see how you add to it as the course continues.

Laramie

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deni
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I like this site. I especially like the gradients when you mouse over the TMCC logo and Facebook Logo.

Denise

angelraiders
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Re: Project One

Post by angelraiders »

I'm sure someones said something about it already, but change the background to black. It will look more cohesive.

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TommieGuy
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Post by TommieGuy »

I feel like a lot of the text elements crowd their space --butting up to the edges.
In the blue rectangle, this is true. But at the same time, all that space in the middle of the blue box is distracting too. So, I would play with the leading or the font size and move the text off the edges of that box. Maybe give one of the blue rectangle text elements more precedence by making it larger than the other and more dominant in the space.

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