project 2

[trisa_lunstrum]

[trisa_lunstrum]

Here are my first two pages, any comments are much appreciated.

[sktlz1965]

Im liking it but something is bugging me with the grid you have. Im not sure if it is because maybe they shoould be aligned or if they should be smaller, as it seems a bit crowded right now, but this all could be personal likes/dislikes. Its def solid tho!
Good job!

Faith

[R3YNO]

These look good Trisa,

The only issue that I for see the body copy will be difficult to make the type live ( which I think we are supposed to have for this project).
But otherwise your layout and photos look great!

[artgalstyle]

It is looking very nice. I think I would make the second page with all the photos scroll so you have room for your type with out it being to crowded or have less photos or some on another page. Can't wait to see more. Logo and buttons look great along with the background photo.

Laramie

[angelraiders]

It seems very busy. The elements you have are making it too much. I think you laid it out fine but the background picture and the picture on top of that make it too much to look at. I would suggest changing your pictures and i would also work on having more contrast between the copy and the background.

[Alaxvong]

I think your pages are layed out well, but the background image has too much contrast. Maybe you can pull it back with some transparency?