I like the darker composition but feel that a lot of the composition competes with each other. Have you thought of filling in the outlined text to establish boundaries within the page and possibly a drop shadow on the triangles to let the user know it has three different buttons in the small group? The other thing is the mixing of fonts with san serif and script, it is a little hard for me to read and my eye travels back to the sanserif text almost immediately. I do however dig the color scheme and I am curious to see where you go with the design.
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Mike_Chavez123
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I see potential and brilliance. Your image pops out the layout, is texture the preliminaries a bit more. Looking good!
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lilykmitch
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Hi Amber!
I like the nature and galaxy feel you're going for it looks like it really represents you with the purples and pinks. I also like the geometric shapes you are using throughout both concepts. If i were to do anything different I would work on the layouts to have more breathability with some white space thrown in. I also like the cool typography you chose to tart bringing into it!
I like the nature and galaxy feel you're going for it looks like it really represents you with the purples and pinks. I also like the geometric shapes you are using throughout both concepts. If i were to do anything different I would work on the layouts to have more breathability with some white space thrown in. I also like the cool typography you chose to tart bringing into it!
Lily Mitchell 
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James Hill
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Hello Amber,
These are some of the most unique designs on here. I recommend going with the cloud designs, I think the layout works best here. I would say maybe tone down the size of the text, but maybe.
These are some of the most unique designs on here. I recommend going with the cloud designs, I think the layout works best here. I would say maybe tone down the size of the text, but maybe.
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Lucky_Penny
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Hi Amber
I like the themes of your designs, the dark space and bright clouds are like night and day. While I like the deep space design, I think it's a little hard to read because you put white stoke around the type. But I like the idea you have for the tabs it's very unique. I'm leaning towards your lighter clouds in the sky design just because it's it is easier to see and a bit more legible. Both your layouts have great navigation which works well with your mobile designs.
I like the themes of your designs, the dark space and bright clouds are like night and day. While I like the deep space design, I think it's a little hard to read because you put white stoke around the type. But I like the idea you have for the tabs it's very unique. I'm leaning towards your lighter clouds in the sky design just because it's it is easier to see and a bit more legible. Both your layouts have great navigation which works well with your mobile designs.
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Hi Amber!
Very striking two sets of designs here! I love how both look so different yet correlate with each other (light vs dark). Personally, I really am drawn to the dark version as it all just pops with the white, purple and black. I would advise if you go with the black/purple one, try experimenting with some different font options as the current is a little hard to read and I would try moving your project navigation to the top (perhaps try using menu bards or smaller buttons as the large shapes make the layout feel a little chunky).
Looking forward to seeing which one you choose and build off of! great work!
Very striking two sets of designs here! I love how both look so different yet correlate with each other (light vs dark). Personally, I really am drawn to the dark version as it all just pops with the white, purple and black. I would advise if you go with the black/purple one, try experimenting with some different font options as the current is a little hard to read and I would try moving your project navigation to the top (perhaps try using menu bards or smaller buttons as the large shapes make the layout feel a little chunky).
Looking forward to seeing which one you choose and build off of! great work!
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Hey Amber!
I love the cloud one so much! It's so fun and expressive! I also really like how clear and organized the website is. The mobile is a bit cramped but I think you can rearrange some stuff and it'll look amazing! Overall both are really solid designs, I just can't take my eyes off the ones with clouds. The space-themed one is cool too!
I love the cloud one so much! It's so fun and expressive! I also really like how clear and organized the website is. The mobile is a bit cramped but I think you can rearrange some stuff and it'll look amazing! Overall both are really solid designs, I just can't take my eyes off the ones with clouds. The space-themed one is cool too!
Yen N.