Project 1 Preliminary Critique
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Mike_Chavez123
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Really cool, I’d play with the image size. This’ll be great for petsmart and chewy.
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lilykmitch
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Hi Ericha!
I really like your first concept! Your logo and the picture you chose look really good together and I think represent your personality well and look super cute. I also love the color you chose it all looks super clean and professional. I think the only think i would do differently would be to work on the layout for the mobile version a little bit but overall i love it!
I really like your first concept! Your logo and the picture you chose look really good together and I think represent your personality well and look super cute. I also love the color you chose it all looks super clean and professional. I think the only think i would do differently would be to work on the layout for the mobile version a little bit but overall i love it!
Lily Mitchell 
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James Hill
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Sup Ericha,
I like your designs and would recommend going with your first design for web. I do like your second design for the web one also. I think my main critique is towards your text. I think its a bit hard to read right now as everything is too close to each other. My other critique is more color usage, I like the two tone choice but it can be a bit boring to look at.
I like your designs and would recommend going with your first design for web. I do like your second design for the web one also. I think my main critique is towards your text. I think its a bit hard to read right now as everything is too close to each other. My other critique is more color usage, I like the two tone choice but it can be a bit boring to look at.
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Hey Ericha!
I really like your first one because there's more color and it's more expressive. I also think it uses the space really well. The second one is cute! I love the dog and I love how the image plays in with the design. I love how you laid everything out on both your pages they're very clean and organized. I love the concepts for both websites a lot! It's just so clean and really good use of space. The mobile is cute too but it needs just a bit more space. Overall though very cute!
I really like your first one because there's more color and it's more expressive. I also think it uses the space really well. The second one is cute! I love the dog and I love how the image plays in with the design. I love how you laid everything out on both your pages they're very clean and organized. I love the concepts for both websites a lot! It's just so clean and really good use of space. The mobile is cute too but it needs just a bit more space. Overall though very cute!
Yen N.
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Megan Greaves
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How are you, Ericha?
All of your layouts are very clean and easy to understand, which is great because it lets your lovely pupper draw the most attention. I love pup. I trust him immediately. The only thing I can think of to suggest would be to add a touch more of that green to the doggo desktop layout, and unfortunately, my first instinctual suggestion is probably very stupid. I want to see the doggo as a duotone with that green. Green doggo for president. (Genuinely not actually sure how though lol.) Only other thing is that the mobile version of the layout is a bit squished, and could use some breathing room. Perhaps if the navigation bar was horizontal instead might give more breathing room for the bodycopy, and it could create an implied border between the doggo and the informational aspects. Just food for thought.
All of your layouts are very clean and easy to understand, which is great because it lets your lovely pupper draw the most attention. I love pup. I trust him immediately. The only thing I can think of to suggest would be to add a touch more of that green to the doggo desktop layout, and unfortunately, my first instinctual suggestion is probably very stupid. I want to see the doggo as a duotone with that green. Green doggo for president. (Genuinely not actually sure how though lol.) Only other thing is that the mobile version of the layout is a bit squished, and could use some breathing room. Perhaps if the navigation bar was horizontal instead might give more breathing room for the bodycopy, and it could create an implied border between the doggo and the informational aspects. Just food for thought.