Project 1 Preliminary - Zach Andrews

[Fatkid53]

I enjoy both the layouts you have here but the second seems to have the most potential for me. I like the script font at the top and the fact that the UI function is smooth and appears user friendly. The darker navy background with the white seascape photo seems more natural, it has a more professional vibe almost feels as if someone else authored the site to promote your work. It looks awesome and I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Regards

[Mike_Chavez123]

Back again Zack!
Looking great! Real paradise/Bahamas I just got out of a 5 star hotel! Keep it up!

[James Hill]

Hi Zach,
Cool designs here would recommend going with the second design. Your font choice is fun and interesting I like the mix of digital and fluid font. I would suggest to remove the image behind the text as it make it a tad bit hard to read. Great Job.

[Ericha Eberhart]

Hi Zach! I like your first design a lot! I think that your color choices play off of the picture and each other pretty well! My critique would have to be to either lighten the brown background some more or match it to the white background of the mobile. I also think the body copy in the mobile rough would be more legible with a left alignment. I think you have a really strong layout!

[Lucky_Penny]

Hi Zach

I like both of your designs it's really hard to choose but I think I like the second one better mostly because it has that contrasts with the white bar at the top I really like your use of typography as well it really gives the Layout personality. The only thing I'd actually change for your second layout is the mobile design it's just a little Squished I think you would definitely benefit from having to pull out side scroller

[TSUL]

Hey Zach,
Both of your layouts are very clean and easy to navigate! I like where you are going with them.
If I had to pick one to go with, I would say the first one mostly because of legibility. I like the bold san serif font as the header instead of the script, I also like the simple color choices with the pattern coming in from the background. Other than that I think you are off to a good start!

-Tyler Sullivan

[yenny]

Hey Zach!

I really really really like your second design! It just needs to be organized a little better and maybe a bit more space. I just love the colors and how your picture pops out from the blue so well. I also like the transparency of the project and the information. It's just so fun and cool! It just needs a little more space in between everything. Your first one is great too but it's just not as fun in my opinion. I also think the second one is more cohesive. I do hope you pick the second one!