Hello James,
Cool designs like the wacky nature of both of them not once was my eyes setting on one thing. I really like your first design , would definitely like to see where that goes. I do like your second design mobile version more then the first mobile design. I would suggest trying some more fun fonts to match your background. Great designs.
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Hi James!
I really like the fun, zany, design feel of your layouts! Both are very well spaced out, easy to read and navigate. In terms of which one I prefer, I personally like the second layout more only because I feel that illustration is so eye catching that it definitely deserves a prime spot within your content rather than the website background itself. Speaking of the background, I feel your alternative background works very well being a black and white graphic that is dense with drawings - definitely gives a feel of a "creative workshop" and considering your company layout name is "curiosity Shop Designs."
Additionally I think the font you chose for that second layout is a better choice. Although I do love the personality of the font in the first layout set and it still being fairly easy to read, subjectively I just like a cleaner font for body text BUT again that's totally subjective as I think either would work and since they're both readable. Looking forward to see where you take these!
I really like the fun, zany, design feel of your layouts! Both are very well spaced out, easy to read and navigate. In terms of which one I prefer, I personally like the second layout more only because I feel that illustration is so eye catching that it definitely deserves a prime spot within your content rather than the website background itself. Speaking of the background, I feel your alternative background works very well being a black and white graphic that is dense with drawings - definitely gives a feel of a "creative workshop" and considering your company layout name is "curiosity Shop Designs."
Additionally I think the font you chose for that second layout is a better choice. Although I do love the personality of the font in the first layout set and it still being fairly easy to read, subjectively I just like a cleaner font for body text BUT again that's totally subjective as I think either would work and since they're both readable. Looking forward to see where you take these!
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Ericha Eberhart
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Hi James! I really like how unique and interesting your designs are, especially your first design! I like that you have a clear structure of hierarchy to direct the eye! My critique would have to be to change your body copy to sentence case instead of all caps to make it easier to read. Nice Start!
-Ericha Eberhart 
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Hello,
Out of these, I like the first design especially. I think the image faded into the background is a lot cleaner of a look with the white font on top of the dark page! It's easy to follow the idea the logo looks nice above the page options, the type you chose looks clean!
Good start!
-Tyler Sullivan
Out of these, I like the first design especially. I think the image faded into the background is a lot cleaner of a look with the white font on top of the dark page! It's easy to follow the idea the logo looks nice above the page options, the type you chose looks clean!
Good start!
-Tyler Sullivan
Tyler Sullivan
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Hi James!
The first one is the one for me! The background is so cool and it makes me want to look through your website more and I think that's the point. I love the depth it provides. I like how everything is organized and clean even though the picture is super crazy and cool. It's so well balanced and just entertaining. Your mobile for it works too! I would just watch out for the boldness of it, and maybe give it a little space. The second one is cool too! I just can't stop looking at your first one!
The first one is the one for me! The background is so cool and it makes me want to look through your website more and I think that's the point. I love the depth it provides. I like how everything is organized and clean even though the picture is super crazy and cool. It's so well balanced and just entertaining. Your mobile for it works too! I would just watch out for the boldness of it, and maybe give it a little space. The second one is cool too! I just can't stop looking at your first one!
Yen N.