Proj01 Final!

[Elle Barre]

OH, I am so freaked out right now! That ufo stare-down on the mobile version really shocked me! I am verklempt right now! Excellent design, it's all groovy and amazing and I really can't stay here and chat because I am afraid of the ufo coming back! ARRRRRGGGGH! So good, stop it! I'll try to say more tomorrow when I calm down maybe. :- ) Excellent, in every way.

[kpargs]

Hey Spencer,
I so enjoy how you tied this all together, definitely not painful to look at, thank you so much for that.

[Meghna_Misson]

Hey Spencer,
AA that background animation looks sick! I love the little UFO flying around in the background, I didn't think of that at all when mentioning the motion graphics effect in the last preliminary, but I'm glad that you had went with it because it is really cool! (Also thank you for mentioning my comment!). As for the rest of the design, I am also glad that you had gone with the sand dune concept, it is again very aesthetically pleasing to the eye and incorporates a lot of space for the user to move around in! So far, my only critiques on your final designs are about your email solely, I think that the font is either too thick that it comes off hard to read or too close together (So I suggest messing around with it a bit more to improve its legibility). But other than that, great work! Would love to see your process on how you had developed the background animation as well!

[Fatkid53]

Hello,
I really like your background and the way you layed out your project. The background has great potential when scaling. I also like the logo in the top left as a concept, I do however worry that it throws off the balance of your composition by being a bit too complex for your current design. The other thing i might tinker with is your body copy and possibly formatting the section as a defined shape, maybe a ufo? as a straight justified right it looks out of place in such a clean design. Love the concepts, good luck.
James

[lilykmitch]

Hi Spencer
I really like the changes you made especially the color to the navigation to match your logo. I think the layout looks really good and i think how you brought in the kabel-like fonts you always use really shows your design style!

[squidgola33]

what's up cousin, I really like how the final came out, I'm a big fan of the background and the colors you've chosen. the name has a lot of elements and color going on and its super rad, I think the colors in the background go perfectly to match this.

[James Hill]

Hey Spencer,
Like your design, Not much to add on from the last critique. I still like your header/name section, and your background artwork is great. I do think the text is a bit small. Overall great design.

[TSUL]

Hey Spencer,


I really like the sand dunes composition and the colors you used under the white type makes a good contrast to that background. I'm not sure how I feel about the heading type in the left corner, it is really distracting in a way that to me is not visually pleasing, but other than that I think there is a lit of success.

-Tyler

[Ericha Eberhart]

Hi Spencer!
I like how everything on your design flows together effortlessly, and the spaceship is so cool! I also think you have some great hierarchy mixed with some great contrasting colors to really pull the eye around. Super cool designs!