Project01 Preliminary Critique

Post links to your Project One websites for discussion and feedback.
bmeyer
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Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique

Post by bmeyer »

Hi Kelsey!
I really love both of your designs! I like the color scheme and photo you chose for the first one and the expressive type you chose for the second one.
My only advice would be to combine aspects of both into one because they are both very strong. Good job!
-Bella
Bella Meyer

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lil_cactux
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Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique

Post by lil_cactux »

Great work Kelsey!

Both of your layouts look so professional, and they are so different! I like the one on the bottom more just because of how fun it is but the one on the top looks super professional. IDK! Hard to choose a favorite. Well done!

NMartz
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Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique

Post by NMartz »

Hello Kelsey,
I like both designs but am definitely liking the second more. The colors in the second one work very nicely. The fonts you chose are good. Everything works. I think using more of the empty space on the right side of the web layout would be good. Nice work.
- Nick Martinez 8-)

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Mars_Sink
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Post by Mars_Sink »

Hi Kelsey,

I love your funky font on the second design! Your work is always consistently breaking the mold. You always have this distinct style that I appreciate. I also like your muted colors, however, I would love to see more colors, still muted but maybe a sage green or soft orange.
- Mars Sink

nancyrey143
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Re: Project01 Preliminary Critique

Post by nancyrey143 »

Hi Kelsey!
I'm digging the second design a lot! The use of your font along with the type you used really gives out the groovy vibe of the website. The only thing I would change is maybe putting the email in the contact me tab, and possibly adding another color like blue or orange. Overall these look great, and I'm looking forward to what you pick.
:)

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