Project01_Prelim
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Erikatsukamoto
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Re: Project01_Prelim
Hey Liv! Nice job, I really like your first design. I might try placing your name at the top of the box, not the bottom.
Re: Project01_Prelim
Aloha Liv,
I am liking the color on your first design very well, it contrasts each other perfectly. The layout I would change though because my eyes are currently playing chess with your boxes instead of focusing on the contents inside of them. It would be better if you aligned them up, left, or right.
For your second design I am really not feeling the layout. It comes off more like a flash game to me rather than a layout for your work. I do really enjoy the colors and the theme of the fluffiness in the designs as they are quite pleasing to look at.
Break a leg! ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪
I am liking the color on your first design very well, it contrasts each other perfectly. The layout I would change though because my eyes are currently playing chess with your boxes instead of focusing on the contents inside of them. It would be better if you aligned them up, left, or right.
For your second design I am really not feeling the layout. It comes off more like a flash game to me rather than a layout for your work. I do really enjoy the colors and the theme of the fluffiness in the designs as they are quite pleasing to look at.
Break a leg! ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪
༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ Kai Madden just backflipped ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ
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nancyrey143
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Re: Project01_Prelim
Hi Liv,
I'm really liking the soft concepts you did for both layouts! I'm leaning more toward the second layout just because I love the clouds. I would just maybe add some links at the top/ out of the circle to give those an emphasis. Overall, great job.
I'm really liking the soft concepts you did for both layouts! I'm leaning more toward the second layout just because I love the clouds. I would just maybe add some links at the top/ out of the circle to give those an emphasis. Overall, great job.
