Hi Jenna,
I'm leaning more toward the first concept just because the blobs seem like such
a fun idea to do. I would just maybe add more white, it's a very dark feeling when
the vibe of the background seems more fun. Overall, great job.
Project 1 Preliminary Critique
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Hinata_Sato
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Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Hi Jenna!
I like the images you chose for both of the designs! I like the first design more since the font you chose for your name pops out and I think it works really well with the shapes you created in the background of your name and project section. My suggestion is to remove the stroke around the boxes for the body copy and resources, projects, and about me section. Nice work!
I like the images you chose for both of the designs! I like the first design more since the font you chose for your name pops out and I think it works really well with the shapes you created in the background of your name and project section. My suggestion is to remove the stroke around the boxes for the body copy and resources, projects, and about me section. Nice work!
Hinata Sato