Project 1 Final

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kaiyote03
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Re: Project 1 Final

Post by kaiyote03 »

Hi Jenna,

Love the theme and colors of your designs. A critique I have is that I wish that you didn't use the transparent boxes but instead use those wavy objects that you used everywhere else.

Good work!
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Erikatsukamoto
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Re: Project 1 Final

Post by Erikatsukamoto »

Hey Jenna! WOW I really love the design that you made here!! Your background image is so strong, and I think the shapes and the color of the shapes that you have go with your image so well and make this such a good design. The only thing I might change is making your body copy just a little bit bigger on your phone design so that its easier to read. Really nice job!!

kevin_ksk
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Re: Project 1 Final

Post by kevin_ksk »

Hey Jenna!



You have a very creative layout! I like the colors. Your logo is very cool and I like the psychedelic vibe generally. Your layout is a bit strange with the navigation being on the left and right. I would add that stuff all at the top where you have a lot of space

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