My project 3 prelim
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Re: My project 3 prelim
Hi Mars >v< I'm loving the soft color pallet of the first design! I would just try to make the nav elements a bit larger on the mobile version, or even add a hamburger menu. Overall , these look so cool!
Re: My project 3 prelim
Hey Mars!
I really like the second design you got, the color scheme works a lot more with the DND vibe and helps make the type pop out more. I would probably add more elements from dnd in the form of say images or imagery like weapons or tools using your geometric style in the background. Great work!
I really like the second design you got, the color scheme works a lot more with the DND vibe and helps make the type pop out more. I would probably add more elements from dnd in the form of say images or imagery like weapons or tools using your geometric style in the background. Great work!
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Re: My project 3 prelim
Hey Mars,
Great re-designs! I am liking the second design best for its readability. I can't see anything I would change, well done!
Great re-designs! I am liking the second design best for its readability. I can't see anything I would change, well done!
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Re: My project 3 prelim
Hi Mars,
I love the colors you have for the first design. I think you made it look more attractive. My advice will be to make the headlines bigger since it's a little hard to see and make a contrast. One big element will help to create a hierarchy as well. Nice work!
I love the colors you have for the first design. I think you made it look more attractive. My advice will be to make the headlines bigger since it's a little hard to see and make a contrast. One big element will help to create a hierarchy as well. Nice work!
Hinata Sato