Laramie's Prelim. pr3

[artgalstyle]

Sorry for the quick sketches. We just got back from Disneyland yesterday. I had an alternate for each of my first pages. Sorry no colors on the sketch.


Second page

Alternate



Alternate first page

Second page

[Alaxvong]

The images are cut off. Remove the img tags, so it links externally. I like the concepts on the first, third and last image. I like the clock concept and the buttons you have on the last page. Those can be great elements.

[thusers]

good ideas. time was of the essence and that is fine. i like to see what the end design will be.

[sktlz1965]

Yea, I think I'm gravitating to the first concept with the clock...I think the use of round objects and swirls (more organic flow) within the gird like structure of your body copy will contrast nicely

Faith

[angelraiders]

i like the dotted line leading you towards different elements. I like the first two, there are all pretty good concepts.

[artgalstyle]

Thanks so far. Maybe I could use the button bar from concept 2 on the 1st. Would like to get something going with color and then get more feedback. I like the round graphics and dotted arrows to. I can point them to what I want you to look at on that page.

[R3YNO]

Like the concept of the first as well, Also they navigation links would be easy to make with live type.

[deni]

I also like the clock concept. Great concept and I am looking forward to seeing where it goes.

Denise

[cheyanne]

;-; its hard to tell what's going on because they're so cut off...

[TommieGuy]

I too like the dotted lines directing the eyes. and I like the idea of one bold shape and iconic navigation. good ideas!