Project One-Prelim

[Verenisse]

HI Laura,
Awesome designs you have. The first one is the nicest, i like the use of the camera for the intro, and how you come out of the N really nice detail. I would only suggest making the type slightly bigger, and placing the GRC 175 piece somewhere else since it does get lost and makes the composition slightly off balance. But overall great work, can’t wait to see it.

[ngrunwald]

Hi Laura,
I enjoyed your first design the most. I liked the choices of color that you used and how you were able to edit yourself into the background by putting yourself into the “N”. I also liked the layout that you used for this design.

[wsgallegos]

Hello,

I really like the first set of roughs and the use of the picture! it fits well with the rest of the composition you've created! the second roughs are good too! maybe try adding white to help with the boldness of the other colors. great start!