Project 01 final

[Instructor]

Looks like you posted two mobile designs here, Seungwoo, so I'm just going to snag a favorite and critique that.

My favorite of the two is the San Diego one. I like the choice of image. It attracts the eye and has a great sunset gradient as well as textures that make it visually interesting. I like the custom cutout around your selfie as well. It's eye catching and a bit unexpected. I like the idea of sectioning the page with horizontal bars. Everything is crisply laid out. Your navigation and project links are easy to fins and, presumably, easy to use. I like your choice of title font. That "About Me" is very visually interesting.

I think the whole thing would look better if you swapped the blue background with a purple or orange from your San Diego sunset image. There's not a lot of margins on your type, either at the top or the bottom. Everything seems very smushed together. I think there's too many fonts as well. It would have looked better if you used the title font for your navigation and a sans-serif for your bodycopy and class info.

Good effort!

[EleanorVanEve]

Hello! I like your first design. The frame you have around your photo adds a futuristic vibe to the design which looks cool. I also like the city (or baseball field?) photo you added. The photography looks nice. I would like to see the web version of this design too.

[ngrunwald]

Hi SeungWoo,
I think that the font that you chose for the website goes very well with the overall look of the website. I liked both of the images you included of the websites as well. Overall, great work!

[lakelyn_dean]

Hi! I like the design with the city picture in it. I like the choice of blue and white and think your navigation is easy to find.