Project 4 Preliminary Critique

[Benjamin_Anderson]

Hello everyone,

I had a lot of fun designing these designs. Here they are.

[Laura]

Hi! Nice options, I like how you completely different. The landscape background is always nice. The glowing font is cool. I would pick something different than black. But these are great starts, nice job.

[Benjamin_Anderson]

Made a mistake here are revised designs.

[troutbelli]

These are nice. It's hard to tell which one I like better. I am a bigger fan of the one that you used the image. It shouts Truckee Meadows.

[Verenisse]

Hi Benjamin,
I like your designs but I would like to see that its part of the TMCC GAMT program, the imagery helps a lot and I feel that it brings your work together. maybe find colors that are a bit more eligible. But overall greta job!

[Olivia_haltom]

Hi! I like the version with the landscape background most, but would want to see the tmcc logo! Great job though!

[Instructor]

Ha! I've never had someone redesign the class website before. Congratulations on the first. That Michael guy, what does he know?

I like the one with the scenic background the best. The background pic is the most visually interesting. The layout seems pretty clean and you have plenty of room to add content as you need. The navigation is easy to see and find. Good use of margin. Everything is nicely separated and organized.

I'd like to see it more closely related to TMCC and graphic communications. Both of your designs are a little disconnected visually from their subject right now. I'm not sold on the blue and black type. I think it blends in too much. You need to use lighter colors and some of those cool transparencies you whipped out for Project Two. These layouts need those transparencies to separate the content out from the background images. Also, include some smaller illustrative pics in the content as well. Maybe on some of the inner page use panoramics of the TMCC campus as background images

Good effort!

[Aub]

Hi! I like the first design a lot. The black background one is clean but I think it doesn't have much visals to look at.

[seungwoo lee]

Hello,

I really like your second web design. I think the match between black background and white type color is perfect.

[CadenM]

I like the tree design. The text could use some sort of translucent box behind it, just so it stands out a bit better. Over all very nice