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seungwoo lee
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Project04 preli

Post by seungwoo lee »

I think this project4 is also very difficult. I think there are a lot of thoughts and difficulties in changing the design of the existing website. Especially for the design of this website, I think the design of the existing website is good. So I'm thinking about how to change it. These pictures I post are rough. My project has to change a lot. So my preliminary versions are not complete.
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Post by Samson VJ Saldana Ornelas »

Hey Seungwoo!
Looks really good so far! I like your modern design a lot, especially with the rectangles for navigation. The only thing I'd say is that maybe work with spreading it out a bit? It seems like there's a lot of open space you can work with, but overall it's solid! Out of both designs, I really like your black and white design a lot. Very strong first designs!
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I really like the black & white version. I think you have put a lot of work into the design and came up with a really nice looking site. I can't wait to see where this goes. The desktop version I think didn't display correctly, but I'm sure you will get that figured out. Good Job
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Hi,
Nice start to your designs. I really like the colors that you have chosen for each design.

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Oh you've got some real interesting ideas here, Seungwoo. I'm totally sold on that Art Deco, classic movie looking one.

I like that you've designed a single page scroller. A strong choice. I just put a bunch of links up in one of my recent class announcements on how to build these. I love the vibe of it. It feels like a big movie premiere in the 1920s or something. Your imagery is so on point for the theme to. It's all grayscale and mysterious with big city shots and landscapes, and those instructor portraits really are something else. You should show Ron his. Great choice of font as well both for your bodycopy and for your subheads. It reinforces the Art Deco vibe you've got going on. Great margins too. Everything has room to breathe, but doesn't fragment. I even like the oddly shaped buttons for the instructor bios.

Make sure all of your subheads are in the Art Deco font. Those "For Example" subheads clash with the section subheads and your bodyciopy. You'll probably need some navigation up toward the top though so people don't have to scroll and scroll.

Good work!
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Post by Olivia_haltom »

I love the art deco vibe you went for, that’s my favorite for sure! I would maybe add one more color other than the grays and whites but other than that, great job!

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Post by Verenisse »

Hey Seungwoo,
Awesome designs, I'm really digging that mobile 2 design it feels like part of a professional website and its clean which I like. If you want you could even add some TMCC green in there it sort of tie it to the school. But overall layouts look great! :D
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Post by Aub »

Hi! I like your work so far. I'm curious to see your final design and how you'll connect it to TMCC without the green logos and greens we usually use! I think it's awesome that you're trying out different colors. Good luck
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Post by SandraT »

Hi Seungwoo,

Good job. I like the dark design because I think the imagery goes really well with it. I'd suggest trying to add a nice accent color to give it more intrigue.
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Post by CadenM »

The colors in the second one are much more dynamic. Great work on both!

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