Project 01 Final!!

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Perchy
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Project 01 Final!!

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Hi! My design is still relatively the same as it was before. I changed the shadows and added a few tweaks to make it feel more real! I took in many other critiques but couldn't make it look how I wanted so I went back to the fonts and such I had before!

Sites that inspired me:
https://www.scrapbooking.com/
https://www.pinterest.com/

Web Design information:
https://www.forbes.com/advisor/business ... n-website/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B-ytMSuwbf8
Bonus (as always): My dad <3
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Thanks,
Percy Ames

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Re: Project 01 Final!!

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Awwww yeah! The skeuomorphic cork board one! It's just as good as I remember. The heart was a good thread marker.

The tighter, same light source shadows (on your computer version) and glossy polaroid really tighten the whole thing up. Those were my complaints on the last one and you've addressed them here. The texturing of this one is just great. I love the look of the cork. It adds such visual interest, too. So many fun details in this one. Your pic still has that faint whiff of blackmail material about it, which is unhinged and excellent. The scribbly typography is just perfect for the content. Love that overlapping feel of all the old post-it notes that have clearly been there for a while. Everything's curling. And the push pins bring a smile to my face.

You've addressed most of my major complaints. Though your drop shadows could have been tighter still on the mobile version.

Excellent work!
"Inspiration is for amateurs. The rest of us just show up and get to work." — Chuck Close

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david_wolstenholm
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Re: Project 01 Final!!

Post by david_wolstenholm »

Hi Perchy,
I like everything about your layout, always did. I like the corkboard backing, and the push pins, the whole theme is unique and very eye-catching. I think it is great and I have not suggestions for you.
David Wolstenholm

rebekah_stevenson
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Re: Project 01 Final!!

Post by rebekah_stevenson »

Hi Perchy,

I really like your creativity for this project! You did a great job organizing everything to fit in the screen and to fit the theme/vibe. I really like the attention to detail with the highlights, shadows and textures. I think the elements you have here you made them work really well together.

Great Job,
Rebekah

Danielle Roberts
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Post by Danielle Roberts »

Hey Perchy,
I love this! Nice work on changing based on the feedback I don't think there is anything to change. You made such a creative web page. I love the corkboard and sticky notes, it adds such an edgy touch.

Hana_Mikie
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Post by Hana_Mikie »

Hi Perchy~

I really like your website design. It feels very personal yet nicely stylized. It gives 2000's vibes and a sense of childhood aura with the pins, notes, and photo on the corkboard. :)
~ Hannah Mikaela Estigoy

m1ggsart
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Re: Project 01 Final!!

Post by m1ggsart »

Hi Perchy.
I really love your design. It looks interesting and dynamic. The texture in the background adds an extra touch of visual interest. Your choice on type also works well. The whole design turned out amazing.
Miguel_Sanchez

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Lhart
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Post by Lhart »

Helllo Perchy!

As before, I really like the design! It feels very engaging and calming. Overall awesome and I see why you didnt change much.
- Liam Hartman :mrgreen:
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Luke_Nelson
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Re: Project 01 Final!!

Post by Luke_Nelson »

Hey Perchy!

Very fun website! I like the extra work you put into making your elements cast a shadow. Everything looks real but in a very cartoony way. If I were to change anything, it would be to fill in your space a little more on your mobile design. I think adding something could make the design a little too busy, so maybe center your picture? Good job! I look forward to visiting your site.
Luke Dakota Nelson

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