Project02 Final

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Luke_Nelson
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Project02 Final

Post by Luke_Nelson »

Hello, Luke here!
I had fun and learned a LOT while making this! I'm already brainstorming other sites I wanna make. I hope you all enjoy my website! I look forward to seeing what all of you made.

Website Link:
https://www.grc175.com/student/fall-2024/luke-nelson/
Luke Dakota Nelson

david_wolstenholm
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Post by david_wolstenholm »

Hi Luke,
I like your web page, it's simple, easy to view, the color palette is good, and I like that you went the extra mile and made your links active. Very cool.
David Wolstenholm

rebekah_stevenson
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Post by rebekah_stevenson »

Hi Luke,

You did a great job executing your project one design. The layering in your name and on the sticky notes is really cool! My suggestions would be to have the same sized margins all the way around "Home" so the box is even and to have margins/space outside your picture because it's going into your name.

Overall great job,
Rebekah

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Instructor
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Structurally, I think you did a good job at replicating your Project One design here, Luke.

You've done a great job programmatically building your scrapbook design with stacks of <div> tags. An interesting approach that you've made work here. For the most part you've brought across your excellent colors which are enhanced by the way the composition sits on a black background. You have generally good margins on all the main elements and my eye finds it's way through your composition quite easily. You've also done a good job of preserving your name as the dominant element of your composition.

The blue navigation blends in with your black background a little too much. Too bad you couldn't get your cool fonts, textured cover image, and rings to work. I'm not sold on the more vivid colors for your post-it notes. Your image needed a little more vertical margin between it and your name above it. I don't think you needed to have all your CSS piled up in the HTML code. A separate CSS would have done the job.

Good effort!
"Inspiration is for amateurs. The rest of us just show up and get to work." — Chuck Close

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Danielle Roberts
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Post by Danielle Roberts »

Hey, Luke,
Great job getting all the info on the webpage and your composition is coming together, I do agree the blue links blend into the background a little. All together love the iron giant image! Great job!

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Lhart
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Post by Lhart »

Hello Luke

I feel like our ideas had some overlap and it looks pre web 2. I like the simple idea executed well and thats what you have. Excellent work with overlaps
- Liam Hartman :mrgreen:
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shasta_the_masta
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Post by shasta_the_masta »

Luke,

Your home page looks neat! I think the composition looks very cool and high-contrast. I agree with everyone that the blue nav links are hard to see, but I had trouble changing my link color on one part of my page, too, so I get it. The link to the funny Spider-man clip made me laugh.
~ Shasta Mori ~

m1ggsart
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Post by m1ggsart »

Hello Luke.
Good job on your design. I like how colorful and dynamic it looks. One thing I would change is margin on the picture under your name, and your bio on the book. Other than that, your design came out great!
Miguel_Sanchez

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Perchy
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Post by Perchy »

Hi Luke!

I love the colors and everything stands out a lot :] Turned out awesome!

Percy
Thanks,
Percy Ames

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Chloe_(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
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Post by Chloe_(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ »

Hey Luke, your website is very nice and and easy to navigate! I like your colors and it appears that your links work! I really struggled with that....Good job!
Chloe Hull

I came. I saw. And I forgot what I was doing.

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