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david_wolstenholm
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project2 final

Post by david_wolstenholm »

Here is the link to my fabulous website:
https://www.grc175.com/student/fall-202 ... lstenholm/
I hope it meets everyone's approval. I tried to stay with my design from project1 but a few mods had to be made.
David Wolstenholm

rebekah_stevenson
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Post by rebekah_stevenson »

Hi David,

You did a great job executing your project one design. The colors are nice and it has a good grid pattern. My suggestion would be to shift your star that is blocking your body copy.

Overall great work,
Rebekah

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You've done a good job realizing your Project One design here, David.

I really like the attention to detail on this one. Everything feels well placed. Your margins are, for the most part, very good throughout the composition. I also like your textures that you use. The metallic blue really helps the header and navigation stand out. The navigation is well placed and easy to use. Nice work injecting your custom font too. It really adds to the look and feel of this layout. My eye moves through the layout really easily, which makes of a comfortable browsing experience. It's even a bit liquid, which we all know is the first step to responsive design.

The last two stars in the bottom of your navigation either disappear or are clipped off on lower resolution/smaller screens. I wish you would have done a little more to differentiate your email link in your bodycopy. Even a slightly different color would have worked.

Nice job!
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TylerOath
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Post by TylerOath »

Looks pretty much like your initial design. so props for that! i was having a hard time doing that myself. the stars are cool too! I would probably add some margin to your header and maybe the site as a whole.
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Danielle Roberts
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Post by Danielle Roberts »

Hey David,
Great work getting Project 1 onto a functional website! I like the blue text and the stars. The only thing when the site is minimized, the stars block the text but overall this is a challenging project so great work all together!

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Lhart
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Post by Lhart »

Hi david

I really like your site!
Is awesome you posted early and the colors, photos, and text is super thematic and funky. I love it!
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m1ggsart
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Post by m1ggsart »

Hello David.
Nicely done. I truly like the font style your use for your website, and how easy is to navigate. The blue gradients work good too. They give your website a lot personality. Nice job!
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Perchy
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Post by Perchy »

Hi David!

This looks wonderful! Everything is very clear and well communicated and easy to look at!

Percy
Thanks,
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Post by shasta_the_masta »

David,

This looks pretty neat! Other than a few areas of overlap (especially where the star covers some of the body copy), this turned out really cool. I love the theme and the colors.
~ Shasta Mori ~

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Post by Chloe_(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ »

Hey David, like the dark background contrasting with the bright blue stars! I love how you made them apart of your navigation, and links are working! Some of mine don't.ಥ╭╮ಥ
Everything looks great, good job!
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