Project 1 Preliminary JGY

[Adrian_Brewster]

Hi Jose!
While they are very different I think both of your designs have a lot you can play with, which is great! The mobile design on your first one, I would recommend having something behind the text in the middle as they kind of blend into the background. There's a lot of negative space that you can work with! Your second design is very visually striking and is awesome, adding different shades of green would definitely spice it up! Especially for your name, a darker green will make it stand out more

[laked02]

Hi Jose,
I really like how these two designs have completely different vibes. The first has a clean and nature-inspired aesthetic that feels professional and calming. The text could pop more against the light background for better readability. The second design is more bold and energetic with its bright green and blocky layout, which really grabs your attention. Spacing out the text and adjusting the contrast would make it a little easier to read. Both have a lot of potential, just refining readability and organization will make them even stronger!