Hey Gerardo!
The design of your first concept is really unique and cool to look at. You can definitely see what you like and what your vibe is base on that design alone. The contrast between the grey and black throws me off a little, switching up the colors of that border will help make it all flow together, maybe a lighter red. I do really enjoy how you made the mobile version go well with he website version. Your second design is a lot more simple but is still a really good design. The boarder around your photo has a similar issue with your first design and the color of it you can play around with. You have some really good designs to work with!
Project 01 Preliminary
Re: Project 01 Preliminary
Hi Gerardo,
Both designs have a strong visual impact! The first, with the bold red and black theme and dragon illustration, is striking, but some text could stand out more with slight contrast adjustments. The second has a clean, modern feel with large typography and a faded background, but maybe consider refining text placement to improve balance. I personally like your first design the best!
Both designs have a strong visual impact! The first, with the bold red and black theme and dragon illustration, is striking, but some text could stand out more with slight contrast adjustments. The second has a clean, modern feel with large typography and a faded background, but maybe consider refining text placement to improve balance. I personally like your first design the best!
~ Lakelyn Dean