Hi Damiano,
I like both designs and both are great as far as layout and structure. The neon green design is my favorite and eye-catching but may be too harsh on the eyes, so maybe muting the colors just a bit could improve the readability. The maroon and purple design looks more "professional" although the contrast between the text and background could be adjusted for better clarity. Both designs have nice and clear navigation. Maybe breaking up the dense text into smaller paragraphs would make the "About Me" section more engaging.
project 01 preliminary
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Adrian_Brewster
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Re: project 01 preliminary
Hi!
Both of your designs have a good layout structure and nothing feels out of place. I especially enjoy the second one due to how you've set up the project links and your picture is very front and center. If you were wanting to go with your first design, changing up the colors to be less vibrant and more mute and add some boarders would really add to it! You can still have vibrancy but its good to spread it out!
Both of your designs have a good layout structure and nothing feels out of place. I especially enjoy the second one due to how you've set up the project links and your picture is very front and center. If you were wanting to go with your first design, changing up the colors to be less vibrant and more mute and add some boarders would really add to it! You can still have vibrancy but its good to spread it out!
~Adrian 
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Lydia_Rigby
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Re: project 01 preliminary
Hey Damiano!
You have excellent layouts and understanding of spacing. I really like the plum color you chose in the second layout, especially when paired with your black and white photo, it makes your page look more sophisticated and mature. Make sure you consider the visual weight between your text and your photo! The first design does that well where the image and info are equal in importance. Whereas in the second layout, the text feels overwhelmed. Give it a little more room to breathe! Lastly, the fonts you chose very much contradict the energy each design gives such as the pretty script font against the bright, bold colors of green and yellow. If you want it to be more cohesive I would suggest taking a look at some other fonts again, and also make sure you find a second preferably san serif font to pair with it!
You have excellent layouts and understanding of spacing. I really like the plum color you chose in the second layout, especially when paired with your black and white photo, it makes your page look more sophisticated and mature. Make sure you consider the visual weight between your text and your photo! The first design does that well where the image and info are equal in importance. Whereas in the second layout, the text feels overwhelmed. Give it a little more room to breathe! Lastly, the fonts you chose very much contradict the energy each design gives such as the pretty script font against the bright, bold colors of green and yellow. If you want it to be more cohesive I would suggest taking a look at some other fonts again, and also make sure you find a second preferably san serif font to pair with it!
Lydia Rigby