Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

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DustDjinn
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Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Post by DustDjinn »

Great changes C.J.!! This is a huge improvement and you should be very proud.
Dustin Hill

mawpe
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Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Post by mawpe »

Nice C.J.! this is a really good looking site. some of the text is hard to read because the colors are so similar but other than that it's really great
Mark Pederson

Justin Hubert
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Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Post by Justin Hubert »

Those colors a little strong for me C.J. I'm having trouble being comfortable looking at them. I also think that one image of yourself and then possibly another image to balance it out rather than 2 would make them seem less stuck on the design to fill space and create symmetry.
Justin Hubert

freem110
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Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Post by freem110 »

I like the top images facing each other a lot. Good layout! The blue type might get a bit lost, other than that awesome!
Brian Freeman

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ekfulton
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Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Post by ekfulton »

Hi there,
I think you are on your way to a solid redesign. I cannot, however, get past all of the misspellings on the design copy. They're everywhere! They make it hard to focus on the design aspects of the site. I'd like to see the design after you have spell-checked it.
E.K. Fulton
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campbell_mckeogh
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Re: Project_1_C.J._Norris_final

Post by campbell_mckeogh »

good work but I think you need to replace one of your bookend profile photos with a different on, the mirror images is kinda weird

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