Project2 Prelim 2nd design (Rachel Mosley)

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Project2 Prelim 2nd design (Rachel Mosley)

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So I took some of your suggestions, and tried a design that is more than my own, rather than altering the original website. I am actually pretty pleased with the Homepage and How the other pages will be. What do you think??
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much, much better. much more your design. i think you are headed in the right direction. i love that you stayed with the same colors, i liked that about the original and the changes that you made on the original. good job, rachel. i know it's daunting sometimes, i feel the same way. you're doing great! :)
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Oops, didn't see this one before I replied to the other. But yes, Rachel, this one is so much better. Your homepage is great and I really like the little Reno landscape you have in there. Your content page is neat and organized, but I'd like to see it without the huge basketball in the background and the green outline around the Reno landscape. While it works on the homepage, I think it's just kind of distracting on this one.
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Hi Rachel,
Much better. I really like the home page great job!! :)
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Wow, great job on these! On the home page I can see the image going even BIGGER!:) The navigation page is pretty sweet. One thing that you can play with is maybe adding a black crisper background and having the basket ball players grey instead…just an idea
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This looks so much better you really made it look great.
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Congratulations on your redesigns, so much better now!!! I like the cityscape and your choice of colors. GREAT JOB!!
Almost responded to the first one..... :D
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hi Rachel, you design looks very profesional better that the other one good job!!
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These designs are much simpler, I like it. I'm excited to see them live!
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Post by Juan Vazquez Lopez »

Hi Rachel,
I like the second one better, definitely you had made a really big change with this page. I like how you had incorporated the logo of the team and the city of Reno. It looks really cool and I like the simplicity of you background although i do not know about the transparency, anyways good job.
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