Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final

Post links to your Project One websites for discussion and feedback.
Justin Hubert
Posts: 91
Joined: Mon Jan 28, 2013 7:01 pm

Re: Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final

Post by Justin Hubert »

Hey Jeremy, I think the space at the bottom of your design could be lessened and maybe a nice textured backgrpound in the far backl layer would add some character to the layout. other than that I think it is pretty clean and serves it's purpose.
Justin Hubert

freem110
Posts: 80
Joined: Mon Jan 28, 2013 6:42 pm

Re: Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final

Post by freem110 »

Nice man, clean and strait forward! Good work!
Brian Freeman

User avatar
ekfulton
Posts: 55
Joined: Mon Jan 28, 2013 8:01 pm

Re: Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final

Post by ekfulton »

Hi there,
I like the monochromatic approach you have taken for your design. I'm not sure a color rollover will add anything to the design, in fact, it might detract from the design. Maybe a glow rollover effect in monochrome or some other type of rollover animation would work better than color to stay true to your design.
E.K. Fulton
ekfulton@gmail.com | 775-298-1515 mobile

User avatar
Heyyou
Posts: 122
Joined: Tue Jan 29, 2013 8:35 am

Re: Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final

Post by Heyyou »

Jeremy,

The clarity and contrast is great in this layout. I agree that the rollovers might need some working on. They need to stand out from their previous state and be more distinctive. Very nice use of layout and hierarchy.

Aharon
Oh stewardess, I speak jive

Aharon Williams

campbell_mckeogh
Posts: 75
Joined: Mon Jan 28, 2013 6:43 pm

Re: Jeremy Winkler Project 1 Final

Post by campbell_mckeogh »

I feel you need at add different profile photo it just seems a bit pretentious to me

Locked